Wednesday, May 23, 2012
Practice paragraphs
3. Describe the character of Raymond and the dynamic between him and Fran.
Raymond and Fran have a very difficult Relationship, this is mainly due to raymonds attitude. Raymond, when first described in the book, was not very polite or considerate. Raymond appears first at Fran's pearents house as Fran's boyfriend. He proves to be not the nicest dinner guest. "So do you two usually go take a piss together?" (p188). "...He wanted to punch the guy who is screwing his daughter!" (p189).The relationship between Fran and Raymond turns south when Fran tries to stab him with a dinner knife. "Catching him completely by surprise,Fran lunged across the table with a knife....." (p192). In conclusion Raymond appears as a rude, inconsiderate character and this is what leads to the demise of his and Fran's relationship.
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this it good but you do not really explain the quotes much. You also dont have much structure in the paragraph
ReplyDeletePippin, you have used some really good quotes that support the question. However you need to work on your grammar and punctuation. Some of your sentences are not clear, and your tenses keep changing. You also haven't explained what the quote means. If you read it again, you will see that you have said a quote, and then moved on with out explaining it first. Good effort!
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